Walking
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Part 1...
Should read “similar to meteorites” although even that is a bit awkward, since it is not the meteorites that the craters are similar to. Maybe try “The crashing eggs can leave craters just as meteorites do, though the eggs themselves...”
Part 2...
This should read “join us”
Should read “similar to meteorites” although even that is a bit awkward, since it is not the meteorites that the craters are similar to. Maybe try “The crashing eggs can leave craters just as meteorites do, though the eggs themselves...”
Part 2...
This should read “join us”
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