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Text FA Badge Elegant Statue

Discussion in 'Text-related Errors' started by Verde, Jul 10, 2019.

  1. Verde

    Verde Member

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    Jun 28, 2019
    Description/Text says: When I first received that beautiful bust, I first thought it would illustrate me.

    Not sure 'illustrate' is the best word here. Perhaps 'picture' or 'represent' or 'show'? In keeping with the subsequent text, perhaps even 'glorify' or 'celebrate'.

    Unsure, perhaps others have better suggestions ...
     
    Last edited: Jul 12, 2019 at 20:16

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